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Post by Vyngynce on Jan 5, 2018 23:49:09 GMT
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Post by elshinare on Jan 6, 2018 6:18:23 GMT
your points and msrp are reversed on the character warbeasts, and Gallows Grove, $25 for a box of 2 (sometimes $20) but I have only really seen lists fielding 1, so you could say either $5 per point or $12.50 per point. I think the ar article would have been a little better taking some lists from the ATC and comparing the relative prices, not just looking at the ADR
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unded
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Post by unded on Jan 6, 2018 9:05:27 GMT
In each new article, you need to either use the full version of an acronym the first time you use it or have an acronym guide as a footer / header in your articles. If they involve calculation (as I suspect they do), then you need to detail those as well. Possibly a primer article of the calculation and why they are relevant as a guide that is linked to your articles (although if you go this route you still need to at least show the full version of each acronym in each article).
Assumed knowledge can easily be the death of clear communication.
-und_ed
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Post by Vyngynce on Jan 6, 2018 13:57:48 GMT
I also need to fix the Morvhana section as I incorrectly described her feat.
I did adjust for Gallows Groves while putting the data together. I have them counted as $12.50 per model. I also tried to avoid talking about them if they were the most expensive model in a list. A lot of the 1 or 2 point support solos will be "expensive", and I noticed in my Menoth article that it started eating up a lot of space.
My next article will talk more about ATC lists. I had already asked some community members for list suggestions, and I wanted to honor their feedback. The ATC data also came out just as I started writing, so I decided to stick with what I had together.
I have a few reasons for including ADR. I am not trying to push the Champions format, but I do feel like the ADR provides a small cross section of the faction. That helps me focus better in my writing. The farther I dip into new factions, the more this will help me. I already got Morvhana's feat wrong here, for example. Basically, I can go and really read over the ADR casters and try to understand how they work, and that saves time in my writing. Lucky for me, the ATC lists are out, so I can use those for examples. I expect all my lists in the next article will be from that set of data.
The definition for CPP is in caption for the first graphic. I thought that might be an obvious enough place, since that is where I first use the term. I will go ahead and edit in a better description, though. Are you looking for the definitions for each column? I could insert a small article going through that, I guess.
My very first article, linked immediately, describes my mathematical process. However, I don't want to include that level of crunchiness to these theme overviews. I want to key in more on the models.
Thank you for your feedback. I'll update the article once I get some coffee. I'll post back when it's done. I want to know what you think. The community has played a big role in helping me write these better.
~Vyngynce
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Post by Vyngynce on Jan 6, 2018 14:45:51 GMT
Updated
-fixed Morvahna -mentioned Scarsfell spam (missed that one) -added a paragraph explaining the graphics -fixed both graphics (derp) -mentioned everyone who gave be the helpful feedback
Thanks!
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