Third list - constructive criticism please

These are the other lists

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Grymkin Army - 74 / 75 points
[Theme] Dark Menagerie

[King of Nothing 1] The King of Nothing [+28]
- Cage Rager [14]
- Crabbit [0(n/a)]
- Crabbit [0(n/a)]
- Crabbits (2) [7]
- Crabbits (2) [7]
- Frightmare [9]
- Frightmare [9]
- Frightmare [9]
- Gorehound [6]
- Gorehound [6]
- Rattler [8]
- Rattler [8]
- Rattler [8]
Gremlin Swarm [0(3)]
Gremlin Swarm [0(3)]
Gremlin Swarm [0(3)]
Gremlin Swarm [0(3)]
Lady Karianna Rose [4]
Dread Rots (min) [7]

Grymkin Army - 74 / 75 points
[Theme] Dark Menagerie

[Child 1] The Child [+29]
- Cage Rager [14]
- Cage Rager [14]
- Crabbit [0(n/a)]
- Gorehound [6]
- Skin & Moans [15]
- Skin & Moans [15]
- Skin & Moans [15]
Gremlin Swarm [0(3)]
Gremlin Swarm [0(3)]
Gremlin Swarm [0(3)]
Gremlin Swarm [0(3)]
Lady Karianna Rose [4]
Dread Rots (min) [7]
Death Knell [13]

She's just not for me I'm afraid, I think there's too much stuff going on and I forget things like phantasms till it's too late. The child does a similar job but much more straight forward. Plus my dice are well known locally to be poor (it's a running joke that for me an average roll off to dice is 5), so power 23 takes dice out of the picture.

I was going for something a little different with the witch list. I've no idea how good it is and it may be better with more heavies, however I like the potential -6 defence and if I can get wraith bane up to I can send a rattler into a haley3 trencher cloud wall and do some serious munching!