I was waiting for PP to release an alternative version of the bad sculpt of the battlebox, but since there doesn't seem to be any plans for it, I finished doing a Maddox conversion myself.
I have tried to make her look a little bit more "warcaster-ish", since the original miniature makes her look just as a random female stormknight. I have also decided to go for a conversion that shows her using the ranged version of her sword, since that is what Maddox usually does in my games, being so-so as a melee fighter.
What do you think? What version would you use if, like me, have both versions painted? (See first page for original Maddox pics).
What stands out to me is that her hair is too white; there doesn't seem to be any shading so it looks like a flat white mass. Even for bright white hair I would start with a darker grey, apply a wash then add the white as the highlights. And if you're painting glow effects, like those lightning coils, it might be a good idea not to go too bright with the rest of the model (including the hair, so only highlight up to a dark grey) so that the glows look brighter.
Other than that she's looking good. The eyes look very nice, great shading on the armour, and I love the way you've been painting the cloth on your Cygnar.